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Re: 'Group-Conditioning' (i.e. brainwashing)
My main problem was with the phrasing of your descriptions. I caught at least 3 or 4 that began with "it was like" or some variation of that. To me, ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: The Salvation of Earth
And of course the military had to get their little bit, finding a way to make weapons better somehow. In this attempt, the SM12 was created, the Smart Missile, Version ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: spaceman in the sky
On the other hand, I enjoyed the first few sentences more than any others from the story. It seemed as the story progressed, the writing style grew more rushed, more ...
Jun 13, 2008